Purple's Platitudes

nothing but words …

movie

31 March 2014

 

 

this needs something more,

exotic scenic locations,

wardrobe changes,

more thrills, suspense,

some more romance,

maybe even a gratuitous sex scene

or two,

some comedy,

laughs are essential

to balance the drama,

maybe rewrite the dialogue,

revise some of the narration,

and let’s get a broader

range of music for the soundtrack,

and don’t go overboard

with special effects,

let’s keep it believable,

after all,

this is the movie

of my life.

 

 

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31 March, 2014 - Posted by | Poetry |

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